This story I rated 2/5 because it's boring, no tension, few things make sense, and it wastes WAY too many chapters on smut. (and the art is sus). My recommendation is to skip this one; I couldn't make it past chapter 48 (end of season 2). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
The main character is a stereotype of shoujo heroines of yesteryear. He is bad at everything, passably cute, innocent, and theoretically pure of heart... even though he knows dragonboy is stealing stuff using dimension door trick, he still willingly accepts the things dragonboy steals and reaps the benefit of this theft. Mc's only talent, being the son of doctors and making tinctures/medicines, is rendered useless by the dragon's spit-healing ability. His only use is being a convenient fk hole I guess.
Also why is mc a weakling with a poor constitution? So he can be constantly damseled? There should be an in-story reason for this that adds to tension somehow but damseling is boring if there's no point to it other than to show off how cool the boyfriend is. All I can do is roll my eyes.
There's no real backstory setup for older brother, an antagonist, where the mc considers him anything other than a nice older brother. Mc isn't into him the way his brother is into mc, so there is no tension where mc has to decide between his sexpest older brother and dragon boy he has already been fking. Older bro never stood a chance. And dragon boy could squash him like a grape if he wanted to, none of which is interesting or compelling to read about. What matters is what mc thinks, who mc is interested in, that is where tension comes from, and there just isn't anything there for older bro, so it's just a waste of space/time, watching him abuse mc. Mc is never going to choose him.
Also why does mc have to hide out in the woods despite being worse than useless, can't hunt, barely can gather weeds or cook, can't do anything to help himself, yet it's totally fine for older brother to continue living in the village? This makes no sense. Both should be shunned if either is going to be for association with the parents. Also the reason the parents where shunned is dumb. Skilled doctors charging too little for services and medicines? The villagers would probably defend them to the death to keep them around, not the opposite. The dragon mythology with the lightning could've been interesting if explained better and worked into the story better. Don't even remember why the parents (i think?) were lightninged to death by the dragon anyway. My memories of this make it seem like this makes no sense either.
What exactly does older bro do for a living anyway? He lives in a huge house/compound yet doesn't really do much other than wander around the woods with a bow on occasion. He also still makes medicines! Throw him out of the village! Why are they letting evil medicine makers associated with the terrible parents still stay in the village?! No sense, makes NO sense.
Dragon boy is actually okay. He's appropriately bratty for being young. It's a little weird to go with "he grew up from an egg to an adult in a week and now I fk him" but okay, I guess "it's magic" is good enough. Dragon boy's mom is shown for all of like 3 panels in the first two seasons wondering where her egg went and then nothing until after season 2. Surely they could've mounted a search and found him by now considering that the weakling mc couldn't've carried the egg THAT far, and a house sitting in the woods by itself is kind of obvious.
(Insert comment about the art and how flat their heads are and the boring character designs for the humans... anyway.)
The main issue here is there's nothing going on in this comic. Mc doesn't want anything. Dragonboy wants mc, but doesn't have more than 2 brain cells in his head so he doesn't think about anything else other than mc and sex. Instead of actually having a plot, such as like, mc wanting to move to a new town and opening a new apothecary business, or wanting to make amends with the town who threw his parents out, or going to study as an apprentice or just.... anything... it's all just smut.
This is not a compelling story, it's just porn.
I'm sure stuff happens beyond chapter 48 but even 48 chapters is too many before anything compelling happens. I just can't drag my way through this comic. I recommend skipping this one.
This story I rated 2/5 because it's boring, no tension, few things make sense, and it wastes WAY too many chapters on smut. (and the art is sus). My recommendation is to skip this one; I couldn't make it past chapter 48 (end of season 2).
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The main character is a stereotype of shoujo heroines of yesteryear. He is bad at everything, passably cute, innocent, and theoretically pure of heart... even though he knows dragonboy is stealing stuff using dimension door trick, he still willingly accepts the things dragonboy steals and reaps the benefit of this theft. Mc's only talent, being the son of doctors and making tinctures/medicines, is rendered useless by the dragon's spit-healing ability. His only use is being a convenient fk hole I guess.
Also why is mc a weakling with a poor constitution? So he can be constantly damseled? There should be an in-story reason for this that adds to tension somehow but damseling is boring if there's no point to it other than to show off how cool the boyfriend is. All I can do is roll my eyes.
There's no real backstory setup for older brother, an antagonist, where the mc considers him anything other than a nice older brother. Mc isn't into him the way his brother is into mc, so there is no tension where mc has to decide between his sexpest older brother and dragon boy he has already been fking. Older bro never stood a chance. And dragon boy could squash him like a grape if he wanted to, none of which is interesting or compelling to read about. What matters is what mc thinks, who mc is interested in, that is where tension comes from, and there just isn't anything there for older bro, so it's just a waste of space/time, watching him abuse mc. Mc is never going to choose him.
Also why does mc have to hide out in the woods despite being worse than useless, can't hunt, barely can gather weeds or cook, can't do anything to help himself, yet it's totally fine for older brother to continue living in the village? This makes no sense. Both should be shunned if either is going to be for association with the parents. Also the reason the parents where shunned is dumb. Skilled doctors charging too little for services and medicines? The villagers would probably defend them to the death to keep them around, not the opposite. The dragon mythology with the lightning could've been interesting if explained better and worked into the story better. Don't even remember why the parents (i think?) were lightninged to death by the dragon anyway. My memories of this make it seem like this makes no sense either.
What exactly does older bro do for a living anyway? He lives in a huge house/compound yet doesn't really do much other than wander around the woods with a bow on occasion. He also still makes medicines! Throw him out of the village! Why are they letting evil medicine makers associated with the terrible parents still stay in the village?! No sense, makes NO sense.
Dragon boy is actually okay. He's appropriately bratty for being young. It's a little weird to go with "he grew up from an egg to an adult in a week and now I fk him" but okay, I guess "it's magic" is good enough. Dragon boy's mom is shown for all of like 3 panels in the first two seasons wondering where her egg went and then nothing until after season 2. Surely they could've mounted a search and found him by now considering that the weakling mc couldn't've carried the egg THAT far, and a house sitting in the woods by itself is kind of obvious.
(Insert comment about the art and how flat their heads are and the boring character designs for the humans... anyway.)
The main issue here is there's nothing going on in this comic. Mc doesn't want anything. Dragonboy wants mc, but doesn't have more than 2 brain cells in his head so he doesn't think about anything else other than mc and sex. Instead of actually having a plot, such as like, mc wanting to move to a new town and opening a new apothecary business, or wanting to make amends with the town who threw his parents out, or going to study as an apprentice or just.... anything... it's all just smut.
This is not a compelling story, it's just porn.
I'm sure stuff happens beyond chapter 48 but even 48 chapters is too many before anything compelling happens. I just can't drag my way through this comic. I recommend skipping this one.