I think it works better if it were shorter. It's okay in the first few chapters, but it gets boring quickly, and after that, it's just bad. It tries to give the story depth in the most superficial and cliche way possible, throwing in really mid boring smut in the middle.
I think it works better if it were shorter. It's okay in the first few chapters, but it gets boring quickly, and after that, it's just bad. It tries to give the story depth in the most superficial and cliche way possible, throwing in really mid boring smut in the middle.