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I really do like this story so far. But why is it so jumpy? I find the transition from sce...

Runa May 9, 2026 10:33 am

I really do like this story so far. But why is it so jumpy? I find the transition from scene to scene a little difficult and get lost sometimes. Am I the only one?

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    jjjayylovesbjalexx May 9, 2026 4:11 pm

    I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard)

    Runa May 9, 2026 5:20 pm
    I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard) jjjayylovesbjalexx

    I see, well guess have to keep up with it or read the novel.

    IDK May 9, 2026 7:13 pm
    I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard) jjjayylovesbjalexx

    I didn't know this one was based on a novel as well