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I really do like this story so far. But why is it so jumpy? I find the transition from scene to scene a little difficult and get lost sometimes. Am I the only one?
I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard)
I see, well guess have to keep up with it or read the novel.
I didn't know this one was based on a novel as well
Why are the chapters so rushed all of a sudden? Not only the smut is missing out but also the general storyline is jumping from scene to scene without much explanation. Why? It was so good before.
i feel like im watching a youtube short LMAOO