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Runa May 9, 2026 10:33 am

I really do like this story so far. But why is it so jumpy? I find the transition from scene to scene a little difficult and get lost sometimes. Am I the only one?

    jjjayylovesbjalexx May 9, 2026 4:11 pm

    I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard)

    Runa May 9, 2026 5:20 pm
    I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard) jjjayylovesbjalexx

    I see, well guess have to keep up with it or read the novel.

    IDK May 9, 2026 7:13 pm
    I think it’s cause it’s loosely derived from the novel. I’m pretty sure the novel has better pacing than this (or so I’ve heard) jjjayylovesbjalexx

    I didn't know this one was based on a novel as well

Runa May 4, 2026 1:57 pm

Tried it now a few times. But honestly FL so annoying and if this is the only explanation why ml is so obsessed with her than I'm sorry but that's kinda thin. Don't know maybe it's just me. But this story ist frustrating and annoying. Don't know where this good rating is coming from. So I'm out

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