Ts should have stuck being a short summer fling story. Like it was only fun when he was on the island kinda enjoying a summer vacation. Being with someone way older secret affair it had a good thrill. Than it continued and it got boring. Just idk in my mind I would have loved it more had it been a short story about a 20 yo high school student having a secret affair with an older guy who happens to be a loan shark. I would have been so excited for it. The excitement left and I was getting bored and it felt like it was being dragggggggged. It was okay beginning was hella good tho. I was screaming “LETS FUCK HIMMMMM” to the loan shark most of the time cuz the bottom looks so fuckable. But ye that was it. That was my experience with this story.
Ts should have stuck being a short summer fling story. Like it was only fun when he was on the island kinda enjoying a summer vacation. Being with someone way older secret affair it had a good thrill. Than it continued and it got boring. Just idk in my mind I would have loved it more had it been a short story about a 20 yo high school student having a secret affair with an older guy who happens to be a loan shark. I would have been so excited for it. The excitement left and I was getting bored and it felt like it was being dragggggggged. It was okay beginning was hella good tho. I was screaming “LETS FUCK HIMMMMM” to the loan shark most of the time cuz the bottom looks so fuckable. But ye that was it. That was my experience with this story.