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Pretty good

this_is_a_mistake May 16, 2026 10:28 am

People have a lot of good critiques for this one, but I mostly feel like I've read worse. I agree the characters were a little stale at the end, but it did give a lot of good reasoning for why ML killed her a bunch of times in the beginning. I think him being so sweet afterwards and denying himself her feelings was probably meant to make up for that, and I do think it overall worked. I can't recall another regression series where the ML killed the FL and I said, "Yeah, okay, fine, you have a reason to like him," by the end. I think the fact that he ended up saving her life more times than he killed her and also suffered multiple deaths of his own helped on this point.

it kept my attention to read the whole thing through in one sitting, even if I did feel the lag other posts have mentioned at times. Not as good as it could've been given the strong start, but I had fun.

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