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3.5/5 Stars — An interesting idea and pretty art, the narration style and fragmental sto...

ivy304 May 20, 2026 11:10 pm

3.5/5 Stars — An interesting idea and pretty art, the narration style and fragmental storytelling is confusing though and leaves some smaller and some bigger holes in narration and plot. Now that I read everything, I think that I got the overall premise and what has happened, but I am not entirely sure xD““
I like their dynamics at the far better than at the beginning, since they develop feelings for each other, although I think the process could’ve been told a bit better, in the sense of more insight on their individual emotions, as well as more dialogue between the two. All in all I would recommend reading, but make sure to keep going, so everything makes (more or less) sense in the end!

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