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Also side note... You could also write a longer and more serious corruption story with more fleshed out characters as well and actually commit. I think that could have worked as well . Instead of this half assed plot in between smut.
Sorry accidentally downveted
So was I put off by the smut? No, I have read equally weird stuff... But there's just something about this that doesn't work?
Like I love a good corruption story... But then you have to commit to it just being smut and nothing else, but the fact that this tried to pretend to have plot, ruined it for me.
And what really pissed me off was that it used one of my least favorite tropes to justify him being abandoned as well.
Some people would probably say that this is the whole point of the corruption tag and yes technically on paper it is exactly that ... But there's just some things in the story that makes the corruption itself unbelievable to me...like I don't buy it...
And don't get me started on the second hand where he's already corrupted... The fucking tone shift is god awful! Like decide what genre you wanna write???????
So yes I fucking hated it despite it having awesome smut