Ugh amateur writing, badly written characters. You are telling me that the seme slept with a person he thought he had never met before, he caught him having sex in the toilet, he fought with him and still slept with him just because he was hit upon even though he is in love with someone else?? How does that make any sense? The seme is not characterized like that at all, he is written as cautious and skeptical. then with the next meeting he is ready to go above and beyond for the person he doesn't even like, what just because he had a crush on him over a decade ago? People don't just change back like that, even for someone they have a crush over. Writer didn't care about explaining why he went to such an extent, so just because he had a crush all those years ago, all this is justified when the uke does the most dirty shit the seme is alien to and doesn't approve? How about starting slowly and steadily and building it up? All the uke is doing is manipulating him, and while it's obvious that the seme will be written as 'saving' the uke from himself, it could have been written way more convincingly. The author doesn't even know what they are writing about, they have no idea how people act, wanting to make a quick buck but that kind of writing is always poor and amateur.
Ugh amateur writing, badly written characters. You are telling me that the seme slept with a person he thought he had never met before, he caught him having sex in the toilet, he fought with him and still slept with him just because he was hit upon even though he is in love with someone else?? How does that make any sense? The seme is not characterized like that at all, he is written as cautious and skeptical. then with the next meeting he is ready to go above and beyond for the person he doesn't even like, what just because he had a crush on him over a decade ago? People don't just change back like that, even for someone they have a crush over. Writer didn't care about explaining why he went to such an extent, so just because he had a crush all those years ago, all this is justified when the uke does the most dirty shit the seme is alien to and doesn't approve? How about starting slowly and steadily and building it up? All the uke is doing is manipulating him, and while it's obvious that the seme will be written as 'saving' the uke from himself, it could have been written way more convincingly. The author doesn't even know what they are writing about, they have no idea how people act, wanting to make a quick buck but that kind of writing is always poor and amateur.