first of all, the concept is good - superpower, hidden abilities, rebellion, enemy to lover? BUT the plot - its not poorly written but it makes it hard for the reader to connect with the characters
I like MC at first, but by the end he is just someone easily swayed by emotion and he never once a main character in each arc. We never see his talent in any fights. And ML -omg, i get that he is fighting for justice but USING EVERY WRONG METHOD. He is seeking freedom for the superhuman, by what? killing the candidates who knows nothing about the world, keep inflicting harm to the agents who are forced by the HQ, killing his lover’s friend??? Like there is no reason to kill director Choi.
Basically, he is seeking revenge on the wrong people. He should fight the HQ but he went and fight the korean branch who also suffering from HQ. He should take a revenge on the higher ups, but noooo lets kill the unrelated agents who is also the corporate slaves. And then he wonder why the korean branch sees him and his people as enemies??
THEY HAVE THE SAME GOALS. If they cooperated earlier, and fights the HQ, this story will be wayyyy better
first of all, the concept is good - superpower, hidden abilities, rebellion, enemy to lover? BUT the plot - its not poorly written but it makes it hard for the reader to connect with the characters
I like MC at first, but by the end he is just someone easily swayed by emotion and he never once a main character in each arc. We never see his talent in any fights.
And ML -omg, i get that he is fighting for justice but USING EVERY WRONG METHOD. He is seeking freedom for the superhuman, by what? killing the candidates who knows nothing about the world, keep inflicting harm to the agents who are forced by the HQ, killing his lover’s friend??? Like there is no reason to kill director Choi.
Basically, he is seeking revenge on the wrong people. He should fight the HQ but he went and fight the korean branch who also suffering from HQ. He should take a revenge on the higher ups, but noooo lets kill the unrelated agents who is also the corporate slaves.
And then he wonder why the korean branch sees him and his people as enemies??
THEY HAVE THE SAME GOALS. If they cooperated earlier, and fights the HQ, this story will be wayyyy better