Aside from it has a good smut, the storyline is odd—i dunno if it’s the dialogue but t...

Aside from it has a good smut, the storyline is odd—i dunno if it’s the dialogue but there are inconsistencies, the main problem kinda feels forced, i just feel the disconnect of the plot.. it’s like events forced into a plot that doesn’t really go well together.. like so random.. it’s mid for me