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NotGuilty June 8, 2026 12:27 am

Ignoring all the other quality issues, why does it feel like the story kept forgetting there were *supposed* to be a/b/o dynamics? He mentioned he was an alpha like twice and then nothing ever came of it

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    Datrulu June 8, 2026 12:39 am

    it being a/b/o was a subplot that existed to add the the MC's humiliation. An alpha, a man of the highest status, trapped in a place where his one quality that gave him power is utterly useless - and he is left at the will of someone he would easily have deemed worthless and lesser than himself.

    NotGuilty June 8, 2026 1:10 am
    it being a/b/o was a subplot that existed to add the the MC's humiliation. An alpha, a man of the highest status, trapped in a place where his one quality that gave him power is utterly useless - and he is left... Datrulu

    Here’s the thing though, that was already being achieved by the fact he’s a rich kid with a powerful daddy. Making him say he’s an alpha and setting it in a world where a/b/o exists had no impact on the story, characters, or circumstances. The only thing the story “gets” out of it is the fact that it can label itself as a/b/o for marketing purposes.

    Like, imagine this story, but instead of calling himself an he calls himself a beta. Or even an omega. Fuck it, let’s have himself call himself a “mermaid”. Nothing would change, because none of his character or story is dependent on him being an alpha or being set in an a/b/o world.

    Idk about you, but if a character in a story called themself a “mermaid,” I’d expect it to, y’know, actually mean something in the context of the story.

    NotGuilty June 8, 2026 1:12 am
    it being a/b/o was a subplot that existed to add the the MC's humiliation. An alpha, a man of the highest status, trapped in a place where his one quality that gave him power is utterly useless - and he is left... Datrulu

    Btw a subplot still needs to have a plot. What you described isn’t a plot, it’s a circumstance lol

    Datrulu June 8, 2026 1:33 am
    Btw a subplot still needs to have a plot. What you described isn’t a plot, it’s a circumstance lol NotGuilty

    Ig I used the wrong word there, whoops Yeah I get what you mean, I meant to say I think that's what the intention behind it was. But I saw there was gonna be a season two so maybe that will bring more focus to the a/b/o dynamics here?