Good...FUNNY! They both lie and it snowballs on each of them. I was laughing thru and I liked both mains, both deceitful :) But story lacked...the turnover of feelings wasn't realistic to me but again being a comedy and short author had to flip it to loving couple fast...ok I can deal lol
Good...FUNNY! They both lie and it snowballs on each of them. I was laughing thru and I liked both mains, both deceitful :) But story lacked...the turnover of feelings wasn't realistic to me but again being a comedy and short author had to flip it to loving couple fast...ok I can deal lol