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It’s a good story, but I really wish it had been longer. A longer version would have mad...

Midnight_darkcircle June 12, 2026 8:44 am

It’s a good story, but I really wish it had been longer. A longer version would have made the characters’ development and their relationship much more believable. I mean, what do you mean the uke just casually forgives the seme after everything he did? And the seme suddenly develops feelings right after sharing his backstory? It felt a little rushed and could have been explored much better.

Despite that, it was still a great read. Also, can we talk about the dog ghost at the end? It was so adorable yet so heartbreaking at the same time. Thinking about it makes me emotional. It was such a cute little detail that added a bittersweet touch to the story.

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