Alright, I will start with my careful feedback. I'll rate this as 7.5? The story itself is quite good, not bad and not good at the same time.
Here is something I would like to address uhh things I don't like and things I like in the story.
First 20 chapters:
First thing first, I don't like how in the early chapters there is always a ràpe scene. Even though the ML doesn't remember it, it's still a rape thing (links is the whole point https://www.mangago.me/home/people/5180054/) but later in the story they stopped it (?). Though I still don't like the way the ML did it and all his nonsense of "if you said my name I will stop" but still continuing it. I would very appreciate it if the author/writer would write a story where a person doesn't need to cry while getting fucked.
2nd of all, in the latest chapters (around Chapter 90 I think?), I think the author likes men who are pregnant getting fucked because that whole 4 chapters were not needed. Like, why fuck during pregnancy? (Or maybe I'm just weird idrk.)
3rd oohh the art there are some points where it's so good, but when they are sideways it got me question why do they have such long ass noses?
4th, I don't like how sacrificial/naive/dumb the MC is, but I might say it's probably because of his immaturity and lack of love from his parents, as well as the fact that he was neglected and treated as a bastard very early on, so I might slide it off.
5th, they could've done more with the chasing arc, as I fear the MC with Roady are much better, but eh, probably just my opinion.
But this is what I really like about them. Without all the sex scenes, it's actually very good. It's like DPI/DBI I forgot the term but those people who have different personalities. It's actually a cool concept, and I think it's new. I just don't like his demon freaky side.
The whole chasing arcif the author really just ended their story at that spot (istg I thought the child Roady was carrying was the MC's child he birthed (￣ε(#￣)Σ))—it would've been really great and fresh, and it's like our MC got the freedom he always wanted, but they ended the arc so fast.
The side characters are good, especially Roady (I think I have a favorite). His whole character is good where he is fun, but also desperate to live. He acts foolish, but also takes responsibility for what he has caused and tries to amend what he has done to our MC.
The whole God thingy is kinda bad, but SHE IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Her attitude and uniqueness are so fresh.
The fox and sage are good, not bad, not good.
Our MC is just 8.5/10. He needs to be a bit smarter and give himself some boundaries.
The ML is 7.3/10. Quite good too, I guess, but he is too vanilla. It feels like he doesn't have thoughts or a mind of his own; he is too MC-centered.
Alright, I will start with my careful feedback. I'll rate this as 7.5? The story itself is quite good, not bad and not good at the same time.
Here is something I would like to address uhh things I don't like and things I like in the story.
First 20 chapters:
First thing first, I don't like how in the early chapters there is always a ràpe scene. Even though the ML doesn't remember it, it's still a rape thing (links is the whole point https://www.mangago.me/home/people/5180054/) but later in the story they stopped it (?). Though I still don't like the way the ML did it and all his nonsense of "if you said my name I will stop" but still continuing it. I would very appreciate it if the author/writer would write a story where a person doesn't need to cry while getting fucked.
2nd of all, in the latest chapters (around Chapter 90 I think?), I think the author likes men who are pregnant getting fucked because that whole 4 chapters were not needed. Like, why fuck during pregnancy? (Or maybe I'm just weird idrk.)
3rd oohh the art there are some points where it's so good, but when they are sideways it got me question why do they have such long ass noses?
4th, I don't like how sacrificial/naive/dumb the MC is, but I might say it's probably because of his immaturity and lack of love from his parents, as well as the fact that he was neglected and treated as a bastard very early on, so I might slide it off.
5th, they could've done more with the chasing arc, as I fear the MC with Roady are much better, but eh, probably just my opinion.
But this is what I really like about them. Without all the sex scenes, it's actually very good. It's like DPI/DBI I forgot the term but those people who have different personalities. It's actually a cool concept, and I think it's new. I just don't like his demon freaky side.
The whole chasing arcif the author really just ended their story at that spot (istg I thought the child Roady was carrying was the MC's child he birthed (￣ε(#￣)Σ))—it would've been really great and fresh, and it's like our MC got the freedom he always wanted, but they ended the arc so fast.
The side characters are good, especially Roady (I think I have a favorite). His whole character is good where he is fun, but also desperate to live. He acts foolish, but also takes responsibility for what he has caused and tries to amend what he has done to our MC.
The whole God thingy is kinda bad, but SHE IS SO BEAUTIFUL. Her attitude and uniqueness are so fresh.
The fox and sage are good, not bad, not good.
Our MC is just 8.5/10. He needs to be a bit smarter and give himself some boundaries.
The ML is 7.3/10. Quite good too, I guess, but he is too vanilla. It feels like he doesn't have thoughts or a mind of his own; he is too MC-centered.
But overall, good.