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I kept thinking the whole time the author seems to have trouble creating anticipation, and tension for violent scenes.
The attempted murder explosion thing got swept under the rug so fast I forgot it even happened. And this, a younger brother attempting to murder his older brother, a VERY dramatic situation, has no insight into the character’s psychologies so Heonjae is explosing his true feelings. But WE DON’T EVEN REALLY CARE bc we never got to have his context…
There’s show don’t tell, which works great for sex scenes, but…
this author is the S tier expert at sex scenes but this action scene was like ♂ “die” ♂