Just ok....when the author at the end says this story is so lacking then ya know it was rushed for whatever reason, and the ending comes too abrupt. The flip over happens too quick. There is no completion truly to this story cause never once does the victim acknowledge feelings for him and is still in revenge stage to me even tho he loosely accepts them (for now) It is toxic obsession fueled in the end by the victim. I wish this was so much more depth and a real completed conclusion, no healing has happened, no growth of characters, just changes to the situation as the toxicity flips so to me this had such potential but doesn't totally deliver. Too bad.
Just ok....when the author at the end says this story is so lacking then ya know it was rushed for whatever reason, and the ending comes too abrupt. The flip over happens too quick. There is no completion truly to this story cause never once does the victim acknowledge feelings for him and is still in revenge stage to me even tho he loosely accepts them (for now) It is toxic obsession fueled in the end by the victim. I wish this was so much more depth and a real completed conclusion, no healing has happened, no growth of characters, just changes to the situation as the toxicity flips so to me this had such potential but doesn't totally deliver. Too bad.