This is funny, i had a lot of fun reading it BUT as someone who has read way too many BLs i can't help but judge the writing even if the story is fun. The MC had a lot of inconsistencies, he had a lot of trauma but he suddenly became friendly with everybody on day 2 of being in the house and not only that, he suddenly fell for ML out of nowhere too. By what he had gone through, he realistically wouldn't have trusted ML in less than a week like he did. There's also the fact ML has quite some inconsistencies too, the plan was to give MC up to his father after he signed a contract but then this fact was never addressed after some chapters, even after ML's father in fact signed it. The whole plan was so sloppy for something they had been planning for years. Also the uncle danger was nowhere near as threatening as the author tried to convey. And about ML's younger brother it feels like a last minute decision, there was never an indication of ML having a brother and he was never mentioned before, I don't mind it being a last minute change from the author but they should've made it be less sudden and abrupt. Tbh i think the author didn't really wanna make season 2. Aaaand we never got an explanation as to how illishire came to exist, sure the blessing may be a lie but how come they got a mark and can have children?? MC doesn't seem like such a good father either, he feels indifferent towards his kid. Anyway I'd still say this is worth reading, 7/10
This is funny, i had a lot of fun reading it BUT as someone who has read way too many BLs i can't help but judge the writing even if the story is fun. The MC had a lot of inconsistencies, he had a lot of trauma but he suddenly became friendly with everybody on day 2 of being in the house and not only that, he suddenly fell for ML out of nowhere too. By what he had gone through, he realistically wouldn't have trusted ML in less than a week like he did. There's also the fact ML has quite some inconsistencies too, the plan was to give MC up to his father after he signed a contract but then this fact was never addressed after some chapters, even after ML's father in fact signed it. The whole plan was so sloppy for something they had been planning for years. Also the uncle danger was nowhere near as threatening as the author tried to convey. And about ML's younger brother it feels like a last minute decision, there was never an indication of ML having a brother and he was never mentioned before, I don't mind it being a last minute change from the author but they should've made it be less sudden and abrupt. Tbh i think the author didn't really wanna make season 2. Aaaand we never got an explanation as to how illishire came to exist, sure the blessing may be a lie but how come they got a mark and can have children?? MC doesn't seem like such a good father either, he feels indifferent towards his kid. Anyway I'd still say this is worth reading, 7/10