reading this in a couple of days really highlights how 1) the plot is swiss cheese with the holes, 2) the characters are… dumb? make nonsensical choices? have zero concept of how to make a plan? all of the above?, and 3) the author’s failure with all of the above have made for a terribly unlikable mc AND ml lol
also, i strongly dislike stories where the mc is like, barely a year or two above legal age, and there’s a big enough age gap with the ML for it to be significant
and the author tries their absolute hardest to never let you forget that the mc is childish, immature, doesn’t have a fully developed frontal lobe, etc. like at that point, the dynamic just feels icky and reminds the reader why 30 year olds dating 20 year olds is always gross lol
i’m not a manwha puritan, i don’t mind the actual age gap, it’s just the way it’s written
reading this in a couple of days really highlights how 1) the plot is swiss cheese with the holes, 2) the characters are… dumb? make nonsensical choices? have zero concept of how to make a plan? all of the above?, and 3) the author’s failure with all of the above have made for a terribly unlikable mc AND ml lol
also, i strongly dislike stories where the mc is like, barely a year or two above legal age, and there’s a big enough age gap with the ML for it to be significant
and the author tries their absolute hardest to never let you forget that the mc is childish, immature, doesn’t have a fully developed frontal lobe, etc. like at that point, the dynamic just feels icky and reminds the reader why 30 year olds dating 20 year olds is always gross lol
i’m not a manwha puritan, i don’t mind the actual age gap, it’s just the way it’s written