There's nothing wrong with romance; what's wrong with this is that there's no buildup to it. No intimate conversations, deeply built conversations, understanding of one another,... in your face? There's little to no chemistry. After the white-haired girl joined the tavern, she just became a boring side character. It's boring and ruined my reading experience.
There's nothing wrong with romance; what's wrong with this is that there's no buildup to it. No intimate conversations, deeply built conversations, understanding of one another,... in your face? There's little to no chemistry. After the white-haired girl joined the tavern, she just became a boring side character. It's boring and ruined my reading experience.