I have lot to pick here because my head literally hurts now. The main characters act so damn cliche like be fr. At one point when ML says you're pathetic to MC, i ended up laughing out loud because how ridiculous their dialogues are seriously.
Also the whole im gonna chain you to bed for your own safety ml & I know things are dangerous but Im still going to be reckless mc is so common now - i hate it so much good god.. like there's no common sense at all.
And whats with mc and that weirdass sympathy for that villainess like are u fr? U saw her kill someone and all that evil shit as an adult too and u think pOwER of wOrDs is gonna make her confess to her crimes and serve jail????? I hate how authors can't make a character kind and good until and unless they're dumb as a pole. Like he can be all those things and be mature too yk? But no, he has blush on his face and a beauty mark under his eye so he must be dumb as a rock so he can all sugar and nice.
I really hatedball the characters except Jin and the initial character design for ML.
I have lot to pick here because my head literally hurts now. The main characters act so damn cliche like be fr. At one point when ML says you're pathetic to MC, i ended up laughing out loud because how ridiculous their dialogues are seriously.
Also the whole im gonna chain you to bed for your own safety ml & I know things are dangerous but Im still going to be reckless mc is so common now - i hate it so much good god.. like there's no common sense at all.
And whats with mc and that weirdass sympathy for that villainess like are u fr? U saw her kill someone and all that evil shit as an adult too and u think pOwER of wOrDs is gonna make her confess to her crimes and serve jail????? I hate how authors can't make a character kind and good until and unless they're dumb as a pole. Like he can be all those things and be mature too yk? But no, he has blush on his face and a beauty mark under his eye so he must be dumb as a rock so he can all sugar and nice.
I really hatedball the characters except Jin and the initial character design for ML.