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I noticed it was too much in this last chapter, but it's because the story is not finished and they have spent already several chapters trying to fix their relationship.. which, for a real person, won't be having only inner dialogs.
I guess this helps to the "annoying inner thoughts" and the lack of real conversations.

Seriously it's like author forgot about something called dialogue, it's always their inner voice, their thoughts, will it end soon? It's annoying af