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The pacing is lowkey so weird Like sm is happening and the first 2 chapters could’ve ea...

Byygvy June 20, 2026 3:07 pm

The pacing is lowkey so weird

Like sm is happening and the first 2 chapters could’ve easily been dragged out to 10, but it’s just one scene to the next….

The art is nice tho

Responses
    Cottonpuff June 20, 2026 3:10 pm

    Agree I think this gonna be one of those manhwas with 16-20 chapters

    Byygvy June 20, 2026 3:12 pm
    Agree I think this gonna be one of those manhwas with 16-20 chapters Cottonpuff

    Ya such a shame because the plot is interesting and the art is pretty but you can tell when the artist doesn’t have a storyboard writer

    Meowzart June 20, 2026 4:04 pm
    Agree I think this gonna be one of those manhwas with 16-20 chapters Cottonpuff

    nah babe probably like 5-8 MAX

    Cottonpuff June 20, 2026 5:36 pm
    nah babe probably like 5-8 MAX Meowzart

    I’m crying

    Karoma June 20, 2026 7:31 pm

    It's done on purpose to show that the ML was smitten with MC from day one and MC got dragged along with ML advances? It's basically done to show how MC doesn't manage to process the sudden and fast developement himself. I don't think it's that bad as it's just the setup for what's to come. Not everything needs to be written down

    KamisamaYor June 21, 2026 5:19 pm
    Ya such a shame because the plot is interesting and the art is pretty but you can tell when the artist doesn’t have a storyboard writer Byygvy

    Hey so just because something is progressing fast doesn’t mean the author doesnt have a story board sometimes it is purposefully done like that. Either because they have a specific plan or because they intend for it to be a short story. And tbh thats fine. Ive read a lot of 5 chapters mangas that are way better than some 100 chapters manhwas

    Karoma June 21, 2026 7:21 pm
    Hey so just because something is progressing fast doesn’t mean the author doesnt have a story board sometimes it is purposefully done like that. Either because they have a specific plan or because they intend... KamisamaYor

    AMEN

    Byygvy June 22, 2026 6:38 am
    Hey so just because something is progressing fast doesn’t mean the author doesnt have a story board sometimes it is purposefully done like that. Either because they have a specific plan or because they intend... KamisamaYor

    Hey so just because something is purposefully progressing fast doesn’t mean it has to be confusing and lack direction! Short stories obviously are gonna be fast paced and I’m not arguing otherwise, but they literally teach you in middle school that having a billion different settings in such a short writing span is gonna get confusing. And obviously there are gonna be good writers who are exceptions, and can write an extremely fast paced story in less than 5 chapters, but this just isn’t one of them.

    KamisamaYor June 22, 2026 4:30 pm
    Hey so just because something is purposefully progressing fast doesn’t mean it has to be confusing and lack direction! Short stories obviously are gonna be fast paced and I’m not arguing otherwise, but they... Byygvy

    Bro the story is not complicated what about it is confusing to you
    You sure talk big for someone who claims to have being taught this in middle school

    Byygvy June 24, 2026 8:32 am
    Bro the story is not complicated what about it is confusing to you You sure talk big for someone who claims to have being taught this in middle school KamisamaYor

    Lmaoo you can’t even comprehend what I’m saying… I’m not arguing that the plot itself is complicated, all I said was I don’t like the fast pacing cuz it makes the story objectively confusing read. Are you just incapable of understanding that someone on the internet might have a different opinion to you?

    Karoma June 24, 2026 9:58 am
    Lmaoo you can’t even comprehend what I’m saying… I’m not arguing that the plot itself is complicated, all I said was I don’t like the fast pacing cuz it makes the story objectively confusing read. Are... Byygvy

    Chill out. out all they're saying is that it's not oBjEcTiVeLy confusing lol obviously it cannot be objektive when minds differ on it

    KamisamaYor June 24, 2026 12:41 pm
    Lmaoo you can’t even comprehend what I’m saying… I’m not arguing that the plot itself is complicated, all I said was I don’t like the fast pacing cuz it makes the story objectively confusing read. Are... Byygvy

    Girl you’re the one who started pulling the “middle school comprehension card on me” and now youre mad cause i answered you on the same note? The audacity. “Are you incapable of understanding that someone on the internet might have a different opion” thats rich coming from you. You literally jumped me because i disagreed with you? Fucking hypocrate.

    DO YOU have comprehension skills? I never said YOU thought the story was complicated. I just said it is NOT complicated and has nothing to be confused about.

    Byygvy June 24, 2026 4:11 pm

    Lmaoo ur all so mad for what?? When did I “jump” you? do you think that everyone expressing an opinion online is secretly out to get you or smth am I not allowed to criticise a story’s pacing? Am I not allowed to be confused or dislike the way an author presented something? It’s not a crime to suggest that a story would benefit from having more chapters … and I really don’t give a fuck if you wanna dick ride the author cuz I’m ngl I don’t even remember what story this is under, cuz you’ve dragged it out for so fucking long

    KamisamaYor June 24, 2026 7:36 pm
    Lmaoo ur all so mad for what?? When did I “jump” you? do you think that everyone expressing an opinion online is secretly out to get you or smth am I not allowed to criticise a story’s pacing? Am I not al... Byygvy

    I simply dissgreed with you at first and YOURE the ond who got pissed darling. Dont try to pull the uno reverse here, read your own comments before replying. This has only been dragged for so long because YOU keep replying. Stop answering if that bothers you