i could feel from the start that this was gonna be a short story, but the ending was still very rushed. chapter 8 kinda felt like the natural midpoint, so something felt off when there was a time skip then straight to marriage in 9, the final chapter. smh i feel like the length should have been doubled, 18 chapters likely would have been enough.
i could feel from the start that this was gonna be a short story, but the ending was still very rushed. chapter 8 kinda felt like the natural midpoint, so something felt off when there was a time skip then straight to marriage in 9, the final chapter. smh i feel like the length should have been doubled, 18 chapters likely would have been enough.