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cute story but a lot of dumb things in it

meeeeeeeee June 22, 2026 9:41 pm

I think the author wanted to make everyone play 3D chess and engage in a battle of the minds but there were so many dumb things in it from start to finish that I literally rolled my eyes sometimes.

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1. the children of the medest family go missing every generation and instead of connecting it to the family that was killing their vassals, the family just ignores it?
2. all the children go missing and so they sent one guard with their 2nd born daughter to her baptism?
3. the evil lady gets a chance to go back to her secret lab and she only steals some of her research but leaves the dad alive? Why would anyone leave a loose end like that? And if she had one more mind-control potion, why would she give it to yohan instead of giving it to the tiger and telling it to kill any medeste that might come through?
4. "hey guys our kids are disappearing so we're going to give the family heirloom destined to save us to someone else"
5. no knowledge of anything is passed through the families?
6. etc etc etc

just dumb lol

Responses
    meeeeeeeee June 22, 2026 9:49 pm

    actually the more i think about it, the dumber the whole plot is.

    the only redeeming qualities are the art and the fact that some of the characters are genuinely likeable (mariel)