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lol he isnt even a 2nd ml hes just a narration device
ikr lmao there is no 2nd ml he had no qualities of one, might as well be an extra
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lol he isnt even a 2nd ml hes just a narration device
ikr lmao there is no 2nd ml he had no qualities of one, might as well be an extra
This story is actually pretty good! The only part I think was redundant was the 2nd ml, I think he didn’t necessarily need to have romantic feelings for her…kinda forced imo. For the rest it’s not a long story and it’s about to end probably, we at least at half of the nov.