This thing is only good for a one off read. Re-reading this now, and I'm having issue with a good number of things.
First off I'd probably endure some things if MC didn't look the way he does for a ~30 year old.
Then again MC is too weak willed, he's been like that since a kid and it's annoying, also he's tooooo attached to his dead lover that he quite literally lost his sense of self, yeah he went through a lot and I could probably never understand him because I'm a third person, but then this won't be my first ghost/psychological story, so I'm judging hard.
And just to be clear, I'm not saying whatever anyone else thinks about the story is wrong or incorrect, we have different way of viewing things
This thing is only good for a one off read. Re-reading this now, and I'm having issue with a good number of things.
First off I'd probably endure some things if MC didn't look the way he does for a ~30 year old.
Then again MC is too weak willed, he's been like that since a kid and it's annoying, also he's tooooo attached to his dead lover that he quite literally lost his sense of self, yeah he went through a lot and I could probably never understand him because I'm a third person, but then this won't be my first ghost/psychological story, so I'm judging hard.
And just to be clear, I'm not saying whatever anyone else thinks about the story is wrong or incorrect, we have different way of viewing things