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care to tell me who's the ml, please?
He's the guy who follows her around like a puppy. Something something glitch. That guy. In a different story, I would have loved them as a couple. They just didn't work for me in THIS story. It felt too forced. It's not a bad story in theory. Everything would normally work for me but I've come back to this a couple times and gotten irritated every time I read it. That's why I left a note for myself.
You hated this story the minute the ML was picked. It quickly became trash. Don't trust the comments on this one, you hate this story, you hate the ML, and the MC quickly became yet another boring Mary Sue with zero agency outside of the plot the longer you read.