Idk the story wasn’t fleshed out enough? Like a good chunk of it was spent on the freaky sex they got up to, with only a couple snapshots showing the good times they spent together. So it didn’t really hit hard when the MC actually passed away. In fact, it seemed like the ML just randomly started loving him one day??? Idk could’ve been great with more chapters
Idk the story wasn’t fleshed out enough? Like a good chunk of it was spent on the freaky sex they got up to, with only a couple snapshots showing the good times they spent together. So it didn’t really hit hard when the MC actually passed away. In fact, it seemed like the ML just randomly started loving him one day??? Idk could’ve been great with more chapters