3.5/5 Stars (short) — My dear god Asha is damn gorgeous! The story, for the most part, is nicely told and comprehensive, although I wish the author would‘ve elaborated more. Mostly it jumpes from one scene to another, but it‘s not always fluidly. The smut is very graphic and juicy - and i mean that literally, there‘s lot of bodily fluids - and although I really love the art, the smut feels a bit shallow, since there’s no set up for intimacy and passion — but that’s just my personal opinion and preference. I think the premise is interesting and it could’ve been told in more detail, suspension, character development and relationship building, but all in all it‘s a good, interesting read and short story!
3.5/5 Stars (short) — My dear god Asha is damn gorgeous! The story, for the most part, is nicely told and comprehensive, although I wish the author would‘ve elaborated more. Mostly it jumpes from one scene to another, but it‘s not always fluidly. The smut is very graphic and juicy - and i mean that literally, there‘s lot of bodily fluids - and although I really love the art, the smut feels a bit shallow, since there’s no set up for intimacy and passion — but that’s just my personal opinion and preference. I think the premise is interesting and it could’ve been told in more detail, suspension, character development and relationship building, but all in all it‘s a good, interesting read and short story!