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On the plus side, there are not unnecessary drama (though I still think they need to tie up the family/clan issue better)
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On the plus side, there are not unnecessary drama (though I still think they need to tie up the family/clan issue better)
But I think the story is rather weak and inconsistent, the world building is lacking, and side characters are not flesh out and one dimensional. It’s just a shame because I can see the potential :(