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I wanted to love this

Pidapipo June 30, 2026 2:33 pm

But I think the story is rather weak and inconsistent, the world building is lacking, and side characters are not flesh out and one dimensional. It’s just a shame because I can see the potential :(

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    Pidapipo June 30, 2026 2:36 pm

    On the plus side, there are not unnecessary drama (though I still think they need to tie up the family/clan issue better)

    Macchi July 1, 2026 10:01 am

    Yeah imo it’s not supposed to be a super serious read which is part of the charm… it’s cute, has plot, has its angsty moments, and it’s funny ones without being too serious. I love our mc though the fact that he’s not crying running away scared or whatever and actually has backbone…. Plus I do like our ml I do think he’s had very significant development from the beginning I’m glad they’re in their happy arc now

    Pidapipo July 1, 2026 10:30 am
    Yeah imo it’s not supposed to be a super serious read which is part of the charm… it’s cute, has plot, has its angsty moments, and it’s funny ones without being too serious. I love our mc though the fac... Macchi

    I know what you mean! I do like how he is feisty and loyal, plus he doesn’t hesitate to get his hand dirty. In the subordinate’s words, they are made for each other haha.

    Blubeagle July 2, 2026 3:15 pm
    I know what you mean! I do like how he is feisty and loyal, plus he doesn’t hesitate to get his hand dirty. In the subordinate’s words, they are made for each other haha. Pidapipo

    Yup!

    Catofishfries July 4, 2026 1:37 am

    Its a smut manhwa written for the sake of porn like idk what to tell u or what u expected but obv its not gonna be an extremely thought out story like comon

    Pidapipo July 4, 2026 11:10 am
    Its a smut manhwa written for the sake of porn like idk what to tell u or what u expected but obv its not gonna be an extremely thought out story like comon Catofishfries

    I find it sad that you have never read a good smut. Trust me they are out there.

    Catofishfries July 4, 2026 3:59 pm
    I find it sad that you have never read a good smut. Trust me they are out there. Pidapipo

    What when did i say that? No correlation trust me ive read A LOT of good smuts lmfaoo