Reread and not as good as I remember

as much as i liked the premise of this story I cannot get past the corny dialogue. It actually kills me because who the hell talks like that??? please stop </33 but anyway after rereading I think it was okay, the redemption was fine and their relationship is good but they lowkey are.. kinda boring. The “tension” they had hardly moved me tbh, like yess give me unsalted chicken. Overall they are cute just a little bland