Responses
I think he was realising he forced Jonak in the beginning like the priest forced the orphans.
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I think he was realising he forced Jonak in the beginning like the priest forced the orphans.
The premise of the story is great, and the art is fab, and the dynamics between Jonak and Adain is so precious. Really like how they converse with each other.
But there’s just one thing that’s bothering me: what triggered Adain to sleep separately from Jonak, and for a very long time at that. What’s with his reaction when Jonak was discussing the thing he saw about the priest? And then later on, we saw him having a dream that he laid with the young Jonak. This part really doesn’t make sense to me.
Overall though, it was a great read.