this story has such a bad cookie cutter typical plot with zero suspense/tension and full on plot armor for MC. it builds zero connection with the audience, and the story is just one thing conveniently happening for MC after another.
it's so bad i can't even explain.... but i cant stop reading also xDD kinda like how yk deep fried high sodium ultra processed chips are bad for your health, but you can't stop eating them anyway. THIS is my chips.
this story has such a bad cookie cutter typical plot with zero suspense/tension and full on plot armor for MC. it builds zero connection with the audience, and the story is just one thing conveniently happening for MC after another.
it's so bad i can't even explain.... but i cant stop reading also xDD kinda like how yk deep fried high sodium ultra processed chips are bad for your health, but you can't stop eating them anyway. THIS is my chips.