kelsy

ok here are my thoughts. this definitely isn’t a porn without plot because there definitely IS plot going on, and it’s actually interesting. ML living a second identity stringing clueless FL along to investigate a life-changing incident in his past. i’m intrigueeed, and it’s enough to keep me reading this. the art is nice too.

however. i initially read this for the smut and i feel completely EDGEDDDDD by the god damn censorship i found it weird that the one night stand flashbacks didn’t show anything but i dismissed it since it was just memories. but the actual sex scenes at ch 18 (the first one!!!) didn’t show anything at all i felt CRAZYYYYY like there are no typical panels of a smut. no penetration, no nipples, no xray vision of penis in vagina or nipples in mouth, didn’t even show the damn dick like what the hell. not even light sabers. it’s all just the back view of ML, or FL’s face in pleasure.

it’s whatever. this feels like a G movie rating smut iykwim. my fault for expecting more i guess i wishhhh this becomes uncensored jebal. otherwise this is ok i like it. feels a bit draggy though but its fineeee

this is cute. mc is sooo adorable i like that she stands her ground and acts on it immediately!! not the typical softie white lotus that surrenders to circumstance without doing a thing.

there aren’t as many sex scenes as i thought for a smut story, but it’s fine because the art is really nice and mc is fun and relatable (the doggy style pose reference in stick figure killed meeee).

and ML is lowkey annoying me for the lack of communication and “why is she doing this” when clearly he hasn’t been doing enough and isn’t paying attention to MC. it’s a common miscommunication trope but i can let it slide because again mc is soooo cute!! i want to see more of her sexual explorations and perhaps they could even branch out to the bdsm scene :3 i hope allll her sexual fantasies come true amen