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Shit from the butt

SunnySideMoon July 6, 2026 9:29 am

14 chapters in yeah im dropping this shit is so ass they cant write a female character at all. First she comes off as this bratty but strong little kid that values her family above all, but in the next chapter she blush and become all shy seeing MC like make up your fucking mind author. I dotn accept excuses like "shes just a kid" when its painfully obvious this is a kid in a male gaze pov.
And why is she not wearing a fire resistant clothes are you fuckign kidding? Theyre in a joint match being burnt is a given ur stupid if u think otherwise, author just wants to strip a 8 year old and embarras her so that MC can save the day. AND WHAT????? ur gonna marry her off just 2 fucking chapter away from their first meeting??? Mimpi basah author bner.

This is my fault for not reading comments first but now i found out this is has harem in it like WOW... obviously a manhwa with awful female writing must has harem in it! If only the me from 5 hours ago read the comment section first i would safe myself the trouble from cringing so hard at this

Responses
    Vlad July 6, 2026 10:55 am

    Just read it further, you'll see how hard the walls he has to face

    SunnySideMoon July 6, 2026 1:53 pm
    Just read it further, you'll see how hard the walls he has to face Vlad

    Oh i actually have no problem with the mc it just gets on my nerves that the female character is written awfully. Maybe i will pick this one up again in the future if im bored enough ^^

    Vlad July 6, 2026 3:08 pm
    Oh i actually have no problem with the mc it just gets on my nerves that the female character is written awfully. Maybe i will pick this one up again in the future if im bored enough ^^ SunnySideMoon

    Lol same problem but the most of the story right now she not mentioned. ╥﹏╥ but it's up to you to read it again

    SunnySideMoon July 6, 2026 6:19 pm
    Lol same problem but the most of the story right now she not mentioned. ╥﹏╥ but it's up to you to read it again Vlad

    Huh really? I dont really want them to shove this forced romance in my face if its written badly tho but if they only appears occasionally i will try to read it again after i finished the mabhwa im reading rn then