The plot's interesting and the smut sort of fits but I do feel the pacing's too fast glancing over a lot of mechanics/strategies and emotional conflicts. It feels a bit like a whiplash going from Reunion and Follow The Sheep Into The Abyss to this story.
The plot's interesting and the smut sort of fits but I do feel the pacing's too fast glancing over a lot of mechanics/strategies and emotional conflicts. It feels a bit like a whiplash going from Reunion and Follow The Sheep Into The Abyss to this story.