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Thanks for your detailed review. I don’t read OI anymore unless it’s decent quality and not too cliche
This seems really interesting! Thanks
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Rating:
9/10
Review:
Such an underrated story!!! The plot seemed common at first, but this turned out to be an unexpectedly heavy read. Despite how short it was, there were so many plot twists, and they were all properly explained and executed throughout the story.
The FL was beautiful, and her character development was amazing! I have a tiny, very tiny, regret about the choice she made, but I still think it was the best course of action for everyone. She was just so selfless.
The ML was refreshing too since he was a commoner, which is pretty rare, especially in stories this well written. He was also a total green flag, and I loved how quickly he noticed the FL's feelings.
The SML and the other side characters were surprisingly well crafted as well. You really couldn't judge them at face value. The enemies were just okay, but I actually think that was a good balance. They were fairly typical, which helped balance out all the craziness of the plot twists happening throughout the story haha!
As for the art, it was gorgeous.
In the end, I finished this in just a few hours, and I'm so happy I gave it a chance. I had seen this before on the old GOAT site, but I think it was still ongoing back then, so I didn't check it out. Then I ended up losing track of it. I'm so glad I finally stumbled upon it again.