This is one of those stories where the made the fall out of love ark great - the author made beakhan really hateable - but the retention ark felt really lacking. It just wasn't believable that they're actually in love, even early on ngl. But my next point is that the artist isn't that skilled in drawing twinks. MC obviously should have been a twink as he's all skin and bones and struggles to gain weight and most importantly was mistaken as a girl, but the artist always drew him buff.
This is one of those stories where the made the fall out of love ark great - the author made beakhan really hateable - but the retention ark felt really lacking. It just wasn't believable that they're actually in love, even early on ngl. But my next point is that the artist isn't that skilled in drawing twinks. MC obviously should have been a twink as he's all skin and bones and struggles to gain weight and most importantly was mistaken as a girl, but the artist always drew him buff.