Was very good while it lasted till the introduction of Jeremy. I don't like his character somehow.
Also I find stories a bit cheap when it apply some spirit pact or similar plot. It just bring makes the Mc look incompetent to rely on some external supernatural forces to win. Yes, I get the setting is fantasy, but I prefer Mc who actually struggles.
It's been a good read. But I don't like that storm castle(?) son, I don't like pushy people. Felt it was out of character for viola to just go "oh thanks for fighting with my dog", I thought her challenge to a duel being fought by herself would have been much better. Coz that's the kind of character she was showcasing in regard to her character pride. I just don't like stories way of utilizing mls introduction in such a pushy, clingy way.
Was very good while it lasted till the introduction of Jeremy. I don't like his character somehow.
Also I find stories a bit cheap when it apply some spirit pact or similar plot. It just bring makes the Mc look incompetent to rely on some external supernatural forces to win. Yes, I get the setting is fantasy, but I prefer Mc who actually struggles.
It's been a good read. But I don't like that storm castle(?) son, I don't like pushy people. Felt it was out of character for viola to just go "oh thanks for fighting with my dog", I thought her challenge to a duel being fought by herself would have been much better. Coz that's the kind of character she was showcasing in regard to her character pride. I just don't like stories way of utilizing mls introduction in such a pushy, clingy way.