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Ppl just be making shit nowadays (sry this was long

Bruno July 15, 2026 8:58 am

I read some of it cuz the cover page looked absurd to me and me and my friend were curious about it but our curiosity literally killed us. Piss enemas, brown dick??, using a finger as a urethra plug, a dildo and dick shoved up in MCs ass, Edwin mentioning Leila's "stinking...cunt", pissing on, fucking on horseback(ok I'm guilty of finding this funny cuz it happened in a different novel I was reading (QJJ lolllll)) and there's like so much more but u know how the brain protects urself by forgetting traumatic events, I think that's what happened. All while everything was nonconsensual. There are probably more kinks mentioned, I heard someone talking about hemmoroids and Edwin's obsession with making Leila's ass brown??? And wasn't a snake fucking Leila or smth and like Leila gave birth?? And with the brown asshole thing idk what kink that even is? Why is his dick brown?? And I check the comments to find that apparently their twin brother children get together. Incest...ok.... I have never understood it cuz like first of all it's illegal, and second of all I don't have a good relationship with my family so me personally I can't comprehend it

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    Bruno July 15, 2026 9:11 am

    Noo it cut off some of it. Let me continue. Even if incest was perfectly fine and legal I still wouldn't understand it though. Finally for the people who say "oh but you read this like ur literally such a hypocrite" what r u gonna do about it puss puss I have the free speech and will to criticize something I've read (I haven't even read the whole thing btw but I can still criticize it because I HAVE FREE WILL). And if ur gonna make a story there will always be criticism (esp with some criminal shit they put in here - im talking about rape and (I've heard) borderline beastiality??? I may be wrong though please correct me and I am terrible sorry if it is wrong). The author also has the free will to write this and publish it. So y'all freaks can still get more slop from this author ig. Like maybe we shouldn't make this mainstream cuz this is just like incel gooner heaven so it should stay in the incel gooner section of yaoi. This is smth that seasoned warriors should handle, not for ppl who just started reading and accidentally stumbled across it when trying to find good ones to read. U don't need to comment but I am happy if u do. If you harass me for my opinion I'll try my hardest to be nice. And u don't even need to comment, like u can like it, dislike it, or simply scroll. Ok have a nice day