I have a lot of points to the story like a lot of thoughts, but the main one is this could’ve been really really good not saying that this isn’t good, but this is a really good concept because this is mad short there is quite a bit of lengthening that this could’ve done with the story I also have a very big issue with the art specifically because it’s so Chibi styled it makes the bottom looks very young, but it also feels kind of inconsistent when it comes to the art. I think it could be a lot better to perk everything better like this could’ve had a good 20 like chapters. like if the other wanted to keep it fast, but not that fast they could’ve done 25 a very good solid story. It would’ve been very nice because there’s very little when it comes to your tentacle. That is actually good. This one was nice. This could’ve been even better. This could’ve had genuine potential it does.
I have a lot of points to the story like a lot of thoughts, but the main one is this could’ve been really really good not saying that this isn’t good, but this is a really good concept because this is mad short there is quite a bit of lengthening that this could’ve done with the story I also have a very big issue with the art specifically because it’s so Chibi styled it makes the bottom looks very young, but it also feels kind of inconsistent when it comes to the art. I think it could be a lot better to perk everything better like this could’ve had a good 20 like chapters. like if the other wanted to keep it fast, but not that fast they could’ve done 25 a very good solid story. It would’ve been very nice because there’s very little when it comes to your tentacle. That is actually good. This one was nice. This could’ve been even better. This could’ve had genuine potential it does.