Ok dont hate me i just started reading this and yea the smut is hot but like…the story development is so unrealistic? I feel like every scene is just an excuse for them to do it/touch each other. Plus the dialogue is so corny too sometimes. For those who finished will this story get better…
Ok dont hate me i just started reading this and yea the smut is hot but like…the story development is so unrealistic? I feel like every scene is just an excuse for them to do it/touch each other. Plus the dialogue is so corny too sometimes. For those who finished will this story get better…