Please remember that this is one of her earliest works so give her some grace too, if you read some of her latest work you can see the difference and similarities over the years. But I can understand your point of view, looking back when I first read this in 2020 compared to now.
Thanks for answering.
I actually thought it was drawn like that intentionally and people liked that style as its been tagged as "beautiful art". Its more abstract which is not a bad thing and it doesnt mean the art is bad or that its her inexperience. Im reflecting on my perspective and the emotions it elicited which made me dislike it.
My issue is with how the mc was drawn, he has this dumb pouty surprised expression on his face and its a look that makes him look stupid and too young, and it makes me really uncomfortable. That is what I hate. I find it hard to believe that the mc was drawn like this due to her lack of skills or inexperience.
I was kind of curious about other peoples perceptions, and analysis.
PS s he has drawn good looking ml/mc in her later work - and shallow me appreciates that.
I like the art, it's distinct. But art isn't objective
i did mention its my subjective view and its not the art - its more why they made the mc look so dumb with a constantly surprised look with that open pouty mouth - is it to make him look stupid?
Do you like that?
does it matter if i do? you're the one who posted the question and if you keep reading, he doesn't have that pouty look later. Also why are you gripping? just don't read it, i doubt you can write something like this, can you?
i posted the question out of interest and for a discussion. Frankly if you are offended then you dont have to answer. Personally i dont enjoy discussions with retards who cant tell the difference between gipping and discussion and take it personally.
Now kindly go fuck yourself and waste someone elses time.
I totally get you. I came across this right after Blood Link years ago, which I still adore. But I just didn't feel like reading it. The vibe just wasn't there.
Then after I finished couple others of BWAT is when I picked Paramour up... ... I can't even remember if I had finished it or not LOL. It's all blurry when it comes to this one not sure why.
But the art topic, yeah, for some it will probably look weird. Especially the proportions. In this one it's actually bad. But I liked it quite a lot in the other stories.
Also I think the pout may be intentional, to give off the Naivety or Innocence of the character's nature. In Blood Link also, the Uke used to have a prominent one in initial chapters.
But in the end, I LOVE BWAT stories, art and story included. It's really gotten beautiful over the years. ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Exactly, her works now are just peakkk... I've literally been binge reading all her works since I read blossoms of the white night. Oh and it's off hiatus, Dear zero too . What could be better than that? But on a serious note, it's understandable if people don't like the art. I personally really like works with good aesthetics, actually this should be for everyone and since reading blossoms of the white night I've felt that others pale compared to it but I still think it's no reason to criticize any ones work.
I find it interesting that so many have tagged this as "beautiful art"
I guess I am one of the few that hates the art. It doesn't make the ml and mc appealing. In fact to me - the mc is drawn to look ridiculous and stupid. I read up to about ch8 but dropping because of the art. Cant take it seriously.
I also find it hard to read mangas because they are black and white.