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Like the thing is written poorly and it’s like they just keep mashing things together
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Like the thing is written poorly and it’s like they just keep mashing things together
Not my cup of tea. The whole parallel world thing is realllyy interesting, but I think the way they introduced the characters seems awkward? IMO they're cramming all sorts of "contrasting" characters in one setting at early chapters, so the run of the story seemed a bit off for me.