As much as I love the ML, the story makes the FL kinda a Mary Sue(?) plop story, I'm throwing that word there but yeah, it's just the way she's introduced like it made my impression of her as a 'genius rebel', feed her that critical thinking, problem solving skills then throw her a sad background story to dumb her down in some scenarios
Make her present self 'badass yas queen let's do our way', then back out with 'oh, I didn't know that before in the previous world'. Well yes thank you for the flaw but the radar of the spectrum is just all or nothing. I only have a beef with the way the story warp this impression to MC, cuz certainly ML is interesting and I'm even more invested with the relationship of Gilbert(?) With his wife, Anyway the sponsor guy, than with MC, definitely nice art, hope to see OTHER GIRL CHARACTER AS WELL since currently it's so full of men, just hoping for the best
As much as I love the ML, the story makes the FL kinda a Mary Sue(?) plop story, I'm throwing that word there but yeah, it's just the way she's introduced like it made my impression of her as a 'genius rebel', feed her that critical thinking, problem solving skills then throw her a sad background story to dumb her down in some scenarios
Make her present self 'badass yas queen let's do our way', then back out with 'oh, I didn't know that before in the previous world'. Well yes thank you for the flaw but the radar of the spectrum is just all or nothing. I only have a beef with the way the story warp this impression to MC, cuz certainly ML is interesting and I'm even more invested with the relationship of Gilbert(?) With his wife, Anyway the sponsor guy, than with MC, definitely nice art, hope to see OTHER GIRL CHARACTER AS WELL since currently it's so full of men, just hoping for the best