Just ok because this short is a moment, and a fast shallow one at that. All the 'I like you, I like you too, then 'Ahh, I like you' again could have been replaced with a real dialogue informing the reader that they have a solid future progressing and give us some extra fluff at the ending. Story felt vacant to me.
Just ok because this short is a moment, and a fast shallow one at that. All the 'I like you, I like you too, then 'Ahh, I like you' again could have been replaced with a real dialogue informing the reader that they have a solid future progressing and give us some extra fluff at the ending. Story felt vacant to me.