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A lot, but okay

alliechan6 July 28, 2026 4:13 am

There is a lot going on, but I didn't have trouble following. I did like that all the FL got their own ML, but the dragon relationship didn't have any lead up.

There are issues where parts of the story seem to be missing. Example: they go to save the ML, they're almost to him...and then time skip to 3 days later??? And they NEVER say what happened!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I thought it was a scan error, but they do flashbacks....but again, don't EXPLAIN how he got saved!! Even the FL is confused.

Other parts I wish we saw more of was younger ML before things went bad.

And there is a child, but no pregnancy chapters. Just a timeskip. :/

Overall ok. Good if you don't have something to read. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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