wtf was that ending i understand they had to change artists but i fear the storytelling took a massive hit too. everything became so confusing and wattpad-y in the worst way possible. the descriptions and sex scenes lost all their sensuality, felix is borderline assaulting isaac every time they do it, and felix just doesnt listen to what isaac wants anymore. part of the appeal for me was that isaac was very strong and the slightly more domineering one in their daily lives and felix loved that shit. its been watered down to big alpha/weak omega when that has never been the case in the earlier section of the story. felix literally blushed at him shooting people with precision ffs. the cherry on top was the random child thrown in when they couldnt even properly write for benjamin — not going to school just because he cried a little bit?? so unrealistic and that could have been the perfect time for felix to comfort him and push the newfound family idea, but whatever. this has just been a massive disappointment for me. it had potential to be one of my favorite stories but the drop in storytelling was jarring. i made myself read until the end in hopes of it getting better but it was just more bullshit.
wtf was that ending i understand they had to change artists but i fear the storytelling took a massive hit too. everything became so confusing and wattpad-y in the worst way possible. the descriptions and sex scenes lost all their sensuality, felix is borderline assaulting isaac every time they do it, and felix just doesnt listen to what isaac wants anymore. part of the appeal for me was that isaac was very strong and the slightly more domineering one in their daily lives and felix loved that shit. its been watered down to big alpha/weak omega when that has never been the case in the earlier section of the story. felix literally blushed at him shooting people with precision ffs. the cherry on top was the random child thrown in when they couldnt even properly write for benjamin — not going to school just because he cried a little bit?? so unrealistic and that could have been the perfect time for felix to comfort him and push the newfound family idea, but whatever. this has just been a massive disappointment for me. it had potential to be one of my favorite stories but the drop in storytelling was jarring. i made myself read until the end in hopes of it getting better but it was just more bullshit.