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Pacing is the issue

Octavia34 July 31, 2026 5:50 pm

They just rushed from thing to thing with little build up to any of them. This should have been a longer story with more fleshing out. There were definitely plot holes and things that generally made no sense. You're telling me a director of an art studio just has a gaggle of men waiting on call to show up for a brawl like a regular gang??? XD no sense.

The story isn't bad, it just wasn't done any favors by the rushed pacing

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